New Inquiry Focus - Astle Writing for Junior Boys Term 3 Week 9

Having spoken with my HOD I have now been moved to conduct an inquiry that looks at ways to improve our boys writing in Year 9 by using asstle data, Some boys, I find can  have a lot to say in the classroom but when it comes to expressing it in writing, they choose to keep it brief leaving out information and details. My first step is to have a better understanding of how student writing works, so I will meet up with Mark, (Literacy expert) after school to gain some knowledge there.